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[FNF Mod Concept Thing]

I like the basic design, however, I asked immediately upon viewing this video why Hank was looking directly at the camera and not at Boyfriend. Seems to be breaking the 4th wall a little bit. Another point I noticed was Girlfriend's legs being so spread, seems a little inappropriate seeing as though she's wearing a dress and sitting down, but it's not too big of a deal. Not too sure what the background has to do with the Madness series or correlates with Hank, but it could be centered around Boyfriend instead so I'll hand you a pass there. Maybe it's my OCD, but the sprites aren't centered properly and they're not equal lengths away from the end of the.. trailer? One more thing that isn't necessary but would be a nice touch is having the trailer Girlfriend is resting on move a bit more than the one Hank and Boyfriend are on, for the background aesthetic. Speaking on the manner, as if not already a given from my last statement, add a little bit of a horizontal shaking effect to make it appear as if the trailers or RVs are moving. Also, try to work on the smoothness of the animations. I know I may be coming off critical, but I ask you do not take it this way, instead view it as constructive criticism. I see the radiant potential in this, you just gotta shoot for it. Make the best mod you can, Mqurje. See you in the potential update.

Mqurje responds:

So pretty much the reason that Hank is like that is because in the original FNF teaser uploaded they showed some concepts for playable characters, one was Hank and it was like that, so I just remade the sprites and animated that. I didn't make it equal or anything mostly because they aren't exactly the same proportions (size) and I didn't really care enough to measure that kind of stuff, GF having her legs like that is mostly just a thing I did as a slight reference to what they originally intended in GF's idle animation, along with trying to show the train was moving fast and all. And from experience with wind and all it's a bit hard to do stuff as little as holding your legs forwards in some positions, this isn't a working mod or anything either, this is just something I put together in Adobe Animate as a simple concept for a possible level/week thing that I may or may not make if I care enough. And for what it has to do with Madness Combat is I just tagged as many things I could (That are related to it in any way) mostly to try and get this seen by more people. And Hank is from Madness Combat so yeah. I completely understand all of your points and all, as I said this is just a concept/idea so I'd most likely use my skills to take this way further if I were to make a full mod out of it. So yeah thanks!